Things To Consider When Making Your Characters Suffer #MondayBlogs

Have you ever had to inflict pain and suffering onto one of your much loved fictional characters?

Have you ever reluctantly tipped a bucket full of life crap over two characters who have just found true love and as you you were doing it felt like you were betraying two old friends?

Have you ever struggled with your emotions while writing a scene where your character suffers and that scene ends up lasting only a few unbearable tiny paragraphs?

Before I published my debut novel Instructions For Falling In Love Again characters in my stories rarely suffered.

If I did have to inflict pain on a character it would last a paragraph at the most and then I would spend 3 lengthy chapters making things up to them.

I have been known to write a paragraph of character suffering and then at editing stage revise the hell out of that paragraph just so the character doesn’t hurt too much.

In addition I have been known to make the path easier for my characters and have gone out of my way to help them out of tricky situations.

Working with my two editors made me understand that characters need to suffer.

Stories need conflict.

Characters need to be put into growth-inducing situations.

I still struggle with making characters suffer though. It’s such a tough thing to do when you are an emotional writer like me. I get far too attached to my characters and I just want them to live in perfect harmony.

But that’s not how real life works.

Here are some points to consider if like me you struggle with hurting fictional folk:

1. Think about real life

In life we are not protected from the consequences of our actions so why should our characters be any different?

In life we admire those who, in the face of adversity, pick themselves up and find the courage to carry on.

The same applies to our fictional characters.

2.  Suffering is a useful tool to build tension

In my romance genre suffering comes in the form of miscommunications, arguments, betrayals, lies, jealousy, bickering, fights over who gets more of the duvet cover, fear of commitment, wanting commitment too soon, long term resentment, incompatible life goals, boredom, family rifts, terrible kisses, secret kisses and worse of all – not enough kisses. All of this suffering helps to build uncertainty and creates tension.

3. Suffering could be your book’s standout.

A character’s suffering and the way he or she deals with it may prove to be the backbone of your story, that one story element that makes your fiction stand up and stand out. When they emerge from all their suffering and pain your characters start to become really interesting and memorable.

4. This is a fictional character.

I have to tell myself (repeatedly) that my characters are not real people and it’s not like I am actually hurting someone.

5. Suffering advances your story. 

It pains me to type this but suffering needs to happen so that your heroes can get to (and earn) their happy ending. Suffering is what propels the plot forward: the protagonist is unhappy with their life as-is and wants to change things.

Do you suffer with this?  

Or are you a tough cookie and making characters suffer is all part of the fun?

What I want to know is how the hell do crime thriller writers cope with making their characters suffer for the full length of the book? They must be nails!

Have a good day!

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Lucy Mitchell lives in South Wales with her husband, her two teenage daughters, a giant labrador and a gang of unruly cats. Lucy is the author of the award winning blog, BlondeWriteMore and was a Featured Romance Author on Wattpad. When she’s not working or writing, Lucy can be found listening to audiobooks in a muddy field with her dog or sat outside her local pub in the sunshine enjoying a glass of wine. Her debut novel Instructions Falling In Love Again is OUT now and already pulling in some fabulous reviews ❤️

11 thoughts on “Things To Consider When Making Your Characters Suffer #MondayBlogs

  1. I’ve no problem making my characters suffer. I know the why and that it’s a means to a conclusion. The story is complete in my head, like a movie I’ve already seen. Besides, if they suffer, it’s their own fault. 😉

  2. We want those HEAs, Lucy, that’s why!
    But, I guess, in order for them to live happily ever after, they’ve got to have some unhappiness that makes the conclusion worthwhile.
    But it’s HARD!!!! 💜

  3. Most of my characters are already suffering when I get them, so I have no guilt whatsoever. Indeed, like you, I spend most of my time finding ways to help them, only to have them stumble and fall again. I feel a bit like an agony aunt some of the time!

  4. I did feel bad when I had to kill my main character’s father. She was already suffering and taking her father, the only one who understood her, was a bad thing to do. He was full of life but needed to go for my story to take its desired shape. To get over it, I kept reminding myself that it’s not true

  5. I do feel bad sometimes making them suffer. I have never tortured my characters. I guess I would do it if the story is based on true events, but just dreaming up creative ways to make people suffer, I would question whether I have a cruel streak somewhere.

  6. You make a great case for the need for suffering- but it IS hard to do it to my characters! I have to justify it by trying to make all of the suffering mean something- planning ways it’s going to impact their choices in the book or make them grow as characters. I think my preferences as a reader influence the struggle, too. I don’t mind a sad book if the ending is worthwhile, but I don’t like a bleak one.

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