I am so excited about this post. As a huge fan of all things romantic and someone who gets very carried away at the sight of any romance, within a ten mile radius, this blog post is going to leave me lying on my sofa with a cold compress on my forehead. Today we are talking about how to write a good kiss.
Now, back in the day, when I was looking for love in Leeds (in the 90s) kissing was a big thing. Especially since most of my dating was done in Ritzy’s nightclub and once a male suitor had impressed me with his dance moves, surrounded by clouds of dry ice, we’d go in for the kiss.
The kiss was an important stage – because I didn’t want to spend the rest of my life with anyone whose kissing skills reminded me of:
- My washing machine on a fast cycle
- A plunger for my blocked sink.
- Snogging a block of ice.
- Snogging some sandpaper
- Snogging a Jack in the Box – his tongue was the Jack which popped out when I wasn’t expecting it and made me jump.
Back in the day I thought I had struck gold when my suitor had velvet lips, no crab stick breath, a shy tongue (at first), a gentle swaying action and maybe one of his hands gently running through my hair. Kissing heaven 😂
When we write romance we have to bring the joy of kissing to life and this is tough. We have to get so much right as writers so that our reader lets out a sigh as they read about our characters engaging in a delicious kiss.
So, I have asked fabulous author of heart-warming and escapist romantic fiction, Kiley Dunbar, to come on my blog and give us some tips.
In their last moments on earth nobody every says, ‘you know what, I wish I’d done less kissing.’
In fact, I can guarantee if you think back to your hottest ex, or take a glance at your significant other, you’ll be inclined to agree it would have been nice if there’d been a lot more kissing and a lot less humdrum.
There’s just isn’t enough kissing in the world. Happily, the romance genre has always been around to redress the balance and to inspire us all to perfect our pout, take one step closer and lock lips.
As well as being oh-so-much fun, kisses are an expression of attraction, an opener for intimacy, and they bring reassurance and reconnection when things have gone wrong. Kisses also make for very special moments: first kisses, you-may-kiss-the-bride-kisses, break-up kisses and make-up kisses. There are some kisses you’ll just never forget, and this applies to kisses on the page too.
As romance readers we’re literary kiss connoisseurs. One of my all-time favourites is Pernille Hughes’s divine eight page clinch in Probably the Best Kiss in the World (One More Chapter, 2019) which has lips that linger long enough to rival Burt Lancaster and Deborah Kerr’s epic screen smooch amongst crashing waves in From Here to Eternity.
I love writing kisses too. Whether you are crafting a slow-burn love story that builds up to one perfect smacker on the final page or a sizzling snog-fuelled steam fest, here are my top five tips for writing kisses your readers will really feel.
The reign of the grabby hero who stifles a heroine’s protests with a stolen kiss is over.
Long live the considerate, consenting kissers of modern romantic fiction. If it’s not mutual and enthusiastic, it’s not romantic.
On-page kisses are motivated by wanting.
When your characters’ lips meet there must be the full force of their attraction behind it. Even if your characters are good at communicating with words, their kiss should also speak volumes about their feelings. A kiss is also a good way of showing any lingering internal conflict: can your characters give way to their desire or is the moment less than perfect due to niggling worries, doubts or obstacles that still require resolution?
3. The bubble.
A really good kiss should be powerful enough to shut out the rest of the world.
You can draw readers into the bubble with unique little details that make the moment intimate: eyes locking; Adam’s apple bobbing with swallowed nerves; the steadying grip on the lapel of a sharp suit; fingertips straying into hairlines and thumbs caressing cheekbones as your lovers move closer. Delicious! And never underestimate the magic of antici … pation. Make your kisses worth waiting for and everyone will be satisfied.
4. Kisses add character.
No two couples are alike so no two on-page kisses should be alike.
Does your cinnamon bun hero live up to his adorable, attentive characterisation and deliver sweet nose-tip rubs as a prelude to mouth to mouth contact? Does your sensual couple linger over eyelid, temple and earlobe kisses to make your reader swoon? Does your whip-smart heroine who knows what she wants guide her partner’s kiss so it’s just right for both of them? Make the kiss fit what readers know of your characters and the dynamic you’ve built up between them.
5. Embodied kisses.
Take the chemistry further than just lips caressing.
The heat of a good kiss should spread through the body. If you can convey hitched breaths, goosebumps rising, hearts beating harder, inner muscles tensing and softening, and the acceleration and deepening of arousal then your reader will be right there in the bubble with your characters.
Right – that’s got me fired up for writing a nice new kissing scene in my Work In Progress. My hero happens to be just-the-right-height-for-delivering-a-forehead-kiss (swoon) and my heroine deserves a truly unforgettable kiss (the kind you feel all the way down) after all the pain I’ve put them through. I hope you’re feeling inspired to get your characters closer too. Now more than ever the world needs the unique healing magic and loving connection of (good) kisses.
Wasn’t that great?
I am going to nip off and start writing a few kissing scenes. Thanks, Kiley, you did me proud with this fab post.
Kiley’s latest romance novel is out and is just a click away.
Love this post! Great advice on kissing – I mean, *writing* about kissing.
Thank you lovely Sandy x
Sigh… I cannot remember the last time I felt a kiss go all the way down… such a perfect way to describe the best kiss ever!
Sigh – yes me too. I wonder if they sell them on amazon? 🙂
Sadly, no… Has to be real!
Fascinating. I’m off to practice… as a sometime writer of comedy, i wonder if you’d do a companion piece on the ways kissing can go wrong yet still convey all that trembling tidal flow of desire you’ve captured above.
I’m sure you’d do that perfectly!!!
Oh yes – when kissing goes wrong! I will cover that over the next few weeks 🙂
Oh Kikey, I’m swooning, here, thinking of writing about kissing!
The way I know I might be hitting the right kissing notes, is when I’m almost uncomfortable, writing, feeling as though I’m getting in the way of the characters intimacy!
Kikey? Kiley!!! And Lucy, thank you for hosting such a fab author! Love Kiley’s books!!! 💜💜
Thank you for reading Ritu
On my writing agenda today is … a kiss! My heroine is going to be the instigator…because y’know, ringing the changes, but I’m nervous because the hero is super hot and she absolutely mustn’t cock it up! I shall have this blog post handily open as I write!
Thanks Kiley…and Lucy! x
Thank you Tracy for reading Kiley’s fab guest post 🙂
Thanks so much for having me Lucy, and for all your lovely comments too! Have fun writing those kisses! Love, Kiley, xx
You were a star!
Never underestimate the power of a great kiss. There’s a lot going on when it’s done correctly, and this article will help me remember all the little details swept away by passion. I write M/M romance, and my characters are always good kissers – though two men tend to get a bit rougher as the action heats up! Thanks for a great post.
Thanks for reading and commenting Alexander.
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The Kiss…and your description to draw readers in…
Thank you 🥰