How To Deal With Characters Who Moan A Lot… #Writers #Author


Have you ever experienced that heart stopping moment when you realise you have a character who is never happy and moans a lot?

Have you created a character who repeatedly complains at length (be it internally or externally) about the problems facing them, and does nothing significant to address their problems?

For the record, I would rather tackle a rebellious or unruly character than tussle with a whiny character.

In recent years I have heard writing friends admit they have an issue with a Debbie Downer type character. After casting them a worried look, I would tell them everything will work out and when they were not listening whisper to myself ‘this will never happen to me…my characters are always cheery!’   

I thought other writers suffered with this issue. This was until some reviewers kindly drew my attention to the whiny main character in my second draft. Gasp, followed by sharp intake of breath.

Whiny characters have been largely unfortunate in life and feel the need to self loathe and lament for a number of pages / chapters.

Readers detest whiny characters. They want a main character to grow and overcome their hardships. Not one who spends six chapters snivelling and curled up in a ball.

When I have not been attending my Whiny Character Support Group Meetings...’my name is Lucy and I have a…..moaning character,’  I have been asking myself the following question – how does one deal with a whiny character?

How do you turn around a character, who made a reviewer write ‘her constant whining did my head in!’ and come back with a transformed character who the reviewer will love?  Is this possible?

So, I have been hard at work researching this troubling writer ailment. Here’s what you need to do when dealing with whiny characters:

  1. Conduct a moan audit. This is one of the best pieces of advice I have found and I squealed with joy when I read about it. Basically you note down how many times they weep and if it’s a regular occurrence you look for other ways they can react to a situation.
  2. Length of moaning. Look at how long your character whines for. Your character needs to be occasionally whiny. Once they have had their ‘woe is me’ moment they need to get a grip of themselves, move on and start trying to change their situation.
  3. Action. Your character needs to take action and start looking for solutions to their life issue. Yes they have been dealt some unfair cards in life but moping about isn’t going to solve things.
  4. Timing of the choice to take action. The character needs to decide to take action to change their situation early on in the book, not after six or seven chapters of gloom. I wish I had read this magical insight before I wrote my second draft.
  5. POV. The potential for whiny characters is strong when using first person, with this POV as you are placed inside a character’s head and are subject to their mental dialogues and heavily skewed views on the world. This is something I’d not considered. If you are using first person be extra vigilant for character whining!
  6. Pull your own emotions out of your writing. This was a big one for me. I am not my main character and I am not dealing with some awful crisis. Don’t let your emotions run away with you. *Sigh*
  7. Being whiny can be infectious. If you are feeling like a Debbie Downer there is a danger your characters will also take on this mindset.

It’s tough out there writers.

So many things to think about when we create our literary masterpieces.


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17 thoughts on “How To Deal With Characters Who Moan A Lot… #Writers #Author

  1. I don’t tend to have whiny characters, but I have to get them to watch their tongue sometimes re their swearing. I’ve this rule now, that swearing is only allowed in moderation as part of authentic characterisation. But then, you could look at it that if it is authentic for someone to whine, then you should let them do so, but maybe they should be doing something more interesting than being curled up in a ball as they whine! Probably starting a book with pages of whining isn’t the best thing, as you need to get your reader to care about your characters and find them interesting, or what’s the point of reading on?

  2. If anyone is whining in my books it’s either because they are there for comic purposes, or are not going to last out the chapter.
    I do have grumblers but they tend to grumble sardonically then get on with dealing with whatever it is they are grumbling about.
    (I seem to recall that back in the 1950s The Angry Young Men group of writers made a steady living out of whining characters whose big moan was that no one cared about or understood them- with good reason!)

  3. Well I will check but I hope my main characters have a positive outlook, despite one suffering some really hard knocks. Dealing with whiny secondary characters (if they refuse to snap out of it) is easy when you write crime fiction – you just kill them off.

  4. I do have a grumpy one but her thing is depression… so cheering her up wouldn’t fit. Making her bipolar could be the option but I’d have to go back and research once more and that could be another reason to delay me finishing.

  5. Whenever I write a whiny character, I try to get to the core of their whininess to find out what the real source of uneasiness. This can help in the understanding of central conflict of the story.

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